Wednesday, February 21, 2018

Where the wild things are!

Wow I have been amazed by the room 16 superstars today! They have begun retelling the story of 'Where the wild things are' and I am so proud of their writing. Once they have finished their writing it will be displayed in the classroom so please come and have a read.

Here is part of Kaydee's writing from today.

'One starry night there was a little boy named Max. He disobeyed his mum and she sent him to bed perishing with hunger! Then he built a tent in his room. All of a sudden trees began to grow! He went in a deserted forest and then he saw a private boat for Max. So he jumped in and sailed through night and day. Max saw the wild things and they roared their terrible roars and gnashed their terrible teeth. Max said "Let the wild rumpus begin!" They called him the most wildest thing of all. '

Here is part of Jada's writing.

'One magical night Max got up to all kinds of mischief. He disobeyed him mum and built a tent in his room. Suddenly green trees started to surround him and his bed inked out and a private boat was lying in the ocean for Max. Max quickly jumped aboard and he sailed over a year to where the wild things are. Then Max arrived at the island.'

I just can't wait to see what they write next...

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