Using Autumn as a stimulus we have been trying to write a description that creates a picture for the reader. Can you imagine what we might be describing when reading these super descriptions?
'As I bolt amongst the dark brown trees I realised the dazzling sun spots my body and twinkles on me. The enchanted forest looks pretty magical. The leaves are not green, they are shades of brown. In the distance I see a humongous pile of leaves. I can't wait to boost up and jump in it!'
By Eli
'As I walk through the sparkling forest I notice the leaves have fallen down and the leaves had changed colour. They are now beautiful shades of red, yellow and orange. Then...what is that? It's a big pile of leaves. As quick as a flash I run as fast as I can. I am so excited so I jump in. The leaves go from side to side like they are dancing like beautiful ballerinas!'
By Claudia
Wow! These are great! It sounded like a Year 4 wrote these! 😀
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